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Purposeful Proposals by ~thecolourblue:iconthecolourblue:

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the lovely lyrics fleeing from your tongue --
such calumny coupled with
such a cache of clandestine glances
eyelash prances
and twilight dances

the grip of your hand against my arm --
such soft seduction meshed with
such a pulling power of purposeful proposals
cherished touches
torn in pieces

the echoing light emanating from your eyes --
such haunting invitation harnessed with
such a longing of lavishness and lust
languishing love
forever faultering

the festering infection within my heart --
such flawed logic linked with
such a vulnerable piece of flesh
falling again
and getting back up

the Spirit living inside my body --
such precious purity promised with
such a rebirth and renewal
rising up
never to come down.
©2005-2009 ~thecolourblue
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Submitted: March 6, 2005
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Another 2 AM poem. Not about anything current... same old stuff.
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~rwirtz:iconrwirtz: Mar 6, 2005, 8:49:18 AM
By reading it out loud, I think you made me break my tongue :lol:
This piece has a high dictionary content, but still it reads easily.
:clap:
~awfuhr:iconawfuhr: Mar 6, 2005, 1:32:19 PM
I love the first stanza. what beautiful imagery this is good stuff.

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"The poet makes himself a seer by a long, prodigious, and rational disordering of all the senses. Every form of love, of suffering, of madness; he searches himself, he consumes all the poisons in him, and keeps only their quintessences."-Arthur Rimbaud
~suzisays:iconsuzisays: Mar 6, 2005, 2:09:57 PM
This is beautiful i love your comand of language it really makes the poem stand out. I love the first stanza so much, though i think it's a shame it's set out a rhyme scheme that the rest of the poem doesn't follow. However the poem works well anyway because the language is poetic in itself, overall it's very succesful.

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Follow knowledge like a sinking star, beyond the utmost bounds of human thought.
~dante-sensei:icondante-sensei: Mar 6, 2005, 3:49:26 PM
I love it.

+fav

<3

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the shepherd won't leave me alone
he's in my face and I
the shepherd of my days
and I want you here by my heart and my head...
~thecolourblue:iconthecolourblue: Mar 6, 2005, 8:16:34 PM
Thanks so much for taking the time to read. :)
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:rose:
~thecolourblue:iconthecolourblue: Mar 6, 2005, 8:17:15 PM
You are too kind. Thank you so much for reading. :)
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~thecolourblue:iconthecolourblue: Mar 6, 2005, 8:17:49 PM
Aw, Kyle. You're so sweet.
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~awfuhr:iconawfuhr: Mar 6, 2005, 8:43:00 PM
no problem. I enjoyed it

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"The poet makes himself a seer by a long, prodigious, and rational disordering of all the senses. Every form of love, of suffering, of madness; he searches himself, he consumes all the poisons in him, and keeps only their quintessences."-Arthur Rimbaud
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